Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
[x]

deviantART

 


I want to be in your arms when I feel weak,
Put one hand on your cheek,
And put my other below your chin,
Our hearts’ attraction pulls us in,
A sweet kiss between our lips,
Your mouth like a flower from which nectar drips,
And I’d catch the falling drops,
Your sweetness never stops.

Betwixt your lips, there’s nothing quite as sweet,
The world is breathing through me,
Like the pulse of angels in your gentle heartbeat,
A moment as sweet as a loving eternity.

Breathing through you, our lips are locked,
You look so very shocked,
You didn’t think I’d make a move,
But you seem to happily approve,
There is a glow in your eyes,
A glitter to their darkness like the flight of fireflies,
A smile runs across your face,
My love is worth the chase.

Betwixt your lips, there’s nothing quite as sweet,
The world is breathing through me,
Like the pulse of angels in your gentle heartbeat,
A moment as sweet as a loving eternity.

I wish this is how it could be,
But its just another fantasy.
©2005-2010 ~EmptyPoetn
:iconemptypoetn:

Author's Comments

...

Comments


love 1 1 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconjedigollum:
ooooh... this is a really great one cavey! you did an awesome job on this one, and all that time you spent shows. even if you've used this subjectso many times (and there is no frogs, hammers, hats or pies) you can still write some amazing poems! exellent job as always and it's a definite :+fav: for me.

--
Jedi Gollum
:nirvana: WE MISS YOU KURT :nirvana:
:iconpaige-the-outcast:
*sniffle* its so sweet! I wish my b/f was closer to me... Whaaa! This is great... I love your words and imagery and the flow... *gives big hug* That is just an amazingly sweet poem! Thats a fucking lucky girl that inspires you to write that! Great job it gets a fav for sure!
~Bethers

--
Kitty (She is way better than pringles)
:iconemptypoetn:
Thanks :!: :!: :!: :hug: I only wish the girl I write this stuff about felt the same.
:iconpaige-the-outcast:
Have you told her how you felt? I know that always makes us girls gussy and such.... lol but if you have and she still doesnt feel the same maybe you should give her time and just be there for her until she relizes what she is missing!

--
Kitty (She is way better than pringles)
:iconjedigollum:
abuse of the smilies, my eeeyees! D:D

Dont forget :boogie:, our lazy dancing friend! And :nirvana: :)

heehee :glomp: :glomp: ... kill the orange one...

i love smilies :heart:

--
Jedi Gollum
:nirvana: WE MISS YOU KURT :nirvana:
:iconalonexeasytarget:
^^ Very sweet. I prefer hugs too, but there's a couple of guys that I don't mind kissing...or *wouldn't* mind kissing. Nice work.

--
I'm just a pitiful anonymous.
:iconnirvanakenshin:
You have a real talent my friend. I can relate to the spectator love. I only wish I could write her a poem like this. I did write her one once. When I asked her to goto JSB (Junior Senior Banquent). It was like:

"Writing a poem to the girl in English class
Trying to make the time to pass
I wonder if she has a date to JSB
If not, would she go with me?"

THankfully she said yes. Thought 'bout putting it up on this site :D.

--
:nirvana:
All Apologies

Mayor Of The World: No Drummer, No Beat, No Problem. Coming Eventually! [link]

Details

June 13, 2005
1.2 KB

Statistics

35
30 [who?]
937 (0 today)
7 (0 today)

Site Map