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The Poet Died Within Me by ~EmptyPoetn:iconEmptyPoetn:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Fixed


I see a blank sheet,
Waiting to be filled,
Poems to complete,
But the poet has been killed.

My mind feels blank,
My heart feels broke,
I have her to thank,
And it only took a poke.

She seemed so great,
But she was a whore,
She brought me to hate,
Then left like the times before.

She is a heartbreaker,
Leading people on,
She is the soul taker,
You’ll miss her when she’s gone.

I can no longer write,
Like I could before,
She broke my heart that night,
And it has remained forever sore.
©2006-2010 ~EmptyPoetn
:iconemptypoetn:

Author's Comments

this is bad...I promise better works are soon to come, I just need some more inspiration.

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~DagonOmega Jan 22, 2006, 7:30:58 PM
Nice man, i havent been really all that together after my ex left me. This poem is really good man; keep up the nice work.

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Love to The Earth Mother :diny:

"And the television's spewing hate, Talk bout the rise of crime rates, Heard the broke state gonna say it, It's all sinking now and we're way too late," --- Tim Armstrong

---The one and only---
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~EmptyPoetn Jan 22, 2006, 8:22:33 PM
Thanks. Yeah, I know the feeling, my love life always sucks but things get better, it just takes time (but I'm impatient lol). :laughing: :aww:
:icondagonomega:
~DagonOmega Jan 22, 2006, 8:30:35 PM
Yeah, such things as love take time. I hope things get better for ya man.

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Love to The Earth Mother :diny:

"And the television's spewing hate, Talk bout the rise of crime rates, Heard the broke state gonna say it, It's all sinking now and we're way too late," --- Tim Armstrong

---The one and only---
Spencer Omega
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~make-love-not-war Jan 22, 2006, 9:01:33 PM
whore? that's pretty harsh...same girl as before? you'll find your inspiration soon. you should just go find a field or a meadow and write.

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~EmptyPoetn Jan 22, 2006, 9:16:00 PM
Who I'm writing about changes a lot depending on my mood and feelings, this one isn't about my current crush like a lot of the more recent ones are. I think I need to start meditating again, to get my inspiration flowing.
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~Midnight-Wolf Jan 23, 2006, 6:08:45 AM
The feelings are put through nicely, the words you chose gives insight. Very nice.

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Lycanthropy, wrapped in terrible mystery, cannot easily be shrugged off as mere figments of an active imagination

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!satanicloser Jan 23, 2006, 8:01:03 AM
Amazing poem. You can really feel the pain. Makes me think of what my boyfriend did though... T_T

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Who told you about cause and effect
Who told you about a heart that can forget
Who told you about fortune and fame
Who told you that the evil has got no name
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~make-love-not-war Jan 23, 2006, 2:35:14 PM
meditating is most excellent for that.

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~LOSTACIDjoKer Jan 26, 2006, 1:54:23 PM
Ouch. Powerful though, I like how it starts as one thing and flows into the next ending up creating a story out of it. Great job!

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