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Every time I find a drop of hope,
I find you, soaking up the residue,
Why do you want to hurt me?
My heart is void, I can’t fix what you destroyed.

Maybe I am wrong again,
Do I mistake your effort?
Maybe you want to save me,
From the everlasting hurt.

Is the drop of hope I found poison?
You lap it up, from the deepest cup,
Do you want to see me smile?
You stay on my side when you want to hide.

I don’t know what to think,
Is there guilt written on your face?
Or is it a sign of your affection,
Trying to help me put my life in place.

I wish the answers were clear,
And that I could Peer into the future that is near.
But the future is beyond me,
I can’t see, what has yet to be.
©2005-2009 ~EmptyPoetn
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very good....very, very goood. it reminds me of a friend i have...there are probably other people who can also connect with this in some way. you really reach people with your writing, you know that? i bet it moves many people. that is a talent that many people do not have. way to go!

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you already know this, but you are extremely talented. Seriously NEVER stop writing.

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won't you miss me?
Wouldn't you miss me at all?
-Syd Barrett
wow this is really good.

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"...and live a life of love, just as Christ loved us and gave himself up for us as a fragrant offering and sacrifice to God."

Ephesians 5:2
aww so sad and great :(:):(:):(
Oh yeah! I remember what Cavey taught me! :) + :( = :|

But :| is noooot how to describe your poems. :worship: Works best!

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Jedi Gollum
:nirvana: WE MISS YOU KURT :nirvana:
lol! you always leave the most amusing comments :) THANKS :hug:
I’d like to believe that but if I did I’d become a very egotistical asshole LOL. I'll write as long as there is something to write about and a reason to. :) But it might be a while before I write anything new.
no problemo!!

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"...and live a life of love, just as Christ loved us and gave himself up for us as a fragrant offering and sacrifice to God."

Ephesians 5:2

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