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Your movement is entrancing,
I watch you as you’re dancing,
Pure poetry in motion,
You made love my only emotion.

You’re so graceful and light on your feet,
Your footsteps are gentle like my heartbeat,
You truly are angelic and elite.

You are adorable and cute,
Before I met you my heart was set to mute,
I couldn’t hear it, so I couldn’t feel,
Before you this life had no appeal.

You’re so beautiful and sweet,
You make me feel warmth and a calming heat,
You filled my emptiness and made me complete.
©2005-2010 ~EmptyPoetn
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Another love poem, I think it’s kinda bad but I have an excuse, I just wrote it and its around 4:30 in the morning, so I am tired and messed up…lol…I was thinking back to a party I was at, and I had a memory in mind about a certain girl that I love, playing DDR. So with that thought in my head and my messed up, tired state of mind, this was the result…lol

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:iconjeeh:
This is beautiful.... Enough said!

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Some say loooove is a ryyythmmmmksjfolkjsvokb;lkn;lksf........
:iconjedigollum:
:glomp: I agree with Jeeh.

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Jedi Gollum
:nirvana: WE MISS YOU KURT :nirvana:
:icondoorfromheaven:
Aww, that poem is great! and haha...sometimes the best stuff comes around in wild hours of the night...err morning -speaks from experience-

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| falling in love is like getting a preview of heaven |

i know how it feels
when love goes away.
:heart:
tread softly.
:iconalonexeasytarget:
Amazing that you came up with that from DDR. *shakes head* ;)

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I'm just a pitiful anonymous.
:iconzanthraax:
Oh no, this doesn't suck! Actually, some of the best poems I ever wind up writing are those sponaneous middle-of-the-night ones. You know, I'm really drawn to your poetry and style of writing because it's got a really strong visual element. One day, if it's okay with you, I'd like to illustrate a poem or two? You know, just like the preview image that shows up at the top? I completely understand if you don't want me to, but I'd like it. :heart:

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:iconemptypoetn:
THANKS!!! Illustrate as many poems as you like!!! That'd be awesome!!! :hug:
:iconmake-love-not-war:
very deep, love is what make life worth living!

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